2022年 12月 11日 作者 gong2022 0

2021考研英语一作文试题解析(福州新东方)



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Part A

Directions:

A foreign friend of yours has recently graduated from college and intendsto find a job in China. Write him/her an email to make some suggestions.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Dot not sign your own name at the end. Use “Li Ming” instead.

You do not write the address. (10 points)

【参考范文】

Dear John,

It’s a great delight for me to hear that you have successfully graduatedand have the intention to seek a job in China. Since I have worked as themanager of HR Department of my company for years, I would like to propose somepractical suggestions for you to find a satisfactory job.

First of all, top priority should be given to figuring out what you aregood at and what you are interested in. Advantages as

well as interest willbring you more motivations to do a good job in your career. Additionally, it’ssensible to well organize your resume. The layout should be clear and compact.It is suggested that the work experiences and the honors you’ve acquired shouldbe closely related to the position you are going to apply for.

I hope the suggestions above would be useful for you. If you have any otherquestions, please feel free to contact me.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

本次小作文考查给一位外国朋友写一封有关在中国找工作的建议邮件。建议信已经多次在英语一和英语二中被考查,所以应该是学生的重点准备的信件类型,故难度不大。

首先定下称呼和落款。题目提到的收信人是写信人的外国朋友,因此可以编写一个名字即可,落款依然是“LiMing”。第一段可以寒暄,接着表达提建议的写邮件的目的。第二段可列举两到三条找工作的建议即可。第三段可以强调一下写信的目的作为过渡,接着提醒对方有问题可联系。

Part B

Directions: write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay you should

1) describe the drawing briefly

3) give your comments

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET2. (20 points)

As is vividly shown in the cartoon, there is a couple of father and sondiscussing the son’s interest. With a confused face, the son, who is dressing asMonkey King, is seriously saying, “Dad, some of my classmates don’t considersinging opera a great fun.” On the contrary, with a smile on his face, thefather answers, “If you have great interest in it, that’s enough.”

What the picture intends to convey is that utmost significance should beattached to sticking to one’s own interest without being distracted andinterrupted by external factors. On the one hand, with the world becomingincreasingly diverse, there are numerous things and ideas that lead us to asituation that we are confused about what we are really interested in andwhether we should follow the voice in our deep mind or comments around us.Therefore, it’s necessary to figure out what we have a passion for. On the otherhand, giving up our interest may bring about regrets in the future, especiallywhen we are not young any more.

To sum up, we should hold on to our interest. Only by this way can we havemore chances to be more successful and less regretful. It is the interest wevalue that will bring us an expected future.

【解析】

本次英语一图画作文没有给出直接的文字标题,但从图中的父子的对话可得出主题可为“坚守个人兴趣的重要性”。属于人生哲理类话题,考生并不陌生,总体来说难度适中。第一段可分为总体描述和细节描述。总体描述阐述父子谈论儿子的困扰,细节描述除了父子二人的说话内容,还应描述二人的表情神态以及儿子的装扮。第二段可分为总分结构,段首句为主题句,点明图片寓意。接着可以用正反论证或原因论证进一步阐述坚守兴趣的重要性,也可增加例子。第三段第一句对第二段内容进行总结,再用一句话提出相应的建议,最后可用强调句倒装句等句型包装一下结尾。